Friday, November 13, 2009

She & He

She knew there was a spark somewhere
and he knew there was a story in place.
She gave him all the chances & cues
and he too, never failed to impress.

Some days went here, some days there,
she lost patience and he lost pace
Neither did she wait for him to speak,
nor did he have the nerve to express.

10 comments:

  1. Aww.Just how many stories remain incomplete for this reason?

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  2. read ur blog randomly n came across this lil thing... the biggest issues of life so simply put...

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  3. :) thanks guys
    glad you'll liked it!

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  4. hey is there a next verse to this...

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  5. No. He & She move apart.

    She meets another he.
    He meets another she.
    Repeat

    :P

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  6. haha guess its the inane need to hope tat wishes for another verse....

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  7. Mihir,

    Since you are a Floyd fan, the first para reminded me of "One Slip" from the Momentary Lapse of Reason album.

    Unlike your second para, the song had a happier ending.

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  8. Mihir, this one is beautifully put. Short and crisp but really catches attention!!

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